Soldier's Home - No Consequences

"He did not want any consequences.  He did not want any consequences ever again.  He wanted to live along without consequences." 
Ernest Hemingway - "Soldier's Home"

The Things They Carried 2 - Soldier's Home: The Weight of Lying:  For so many years, we read "Soldier's Home" by Ernest Hemingway as an epilogue to All Quiet on the Western Front.  It became the story of what would have happened - had Paul Baumer made it home. When The Things They Carried was added to our class - it made so much more sense to put it here.  Like so many of the soldier's described in O'Brien's Vietnam era novel - Harold Krebs (from "Soldier's Home") is dealing with and feeling the weight of the things that he has brought back with him from the war - many of these having to do with his own lies about the conflict.  So too Timmy...

Lesson Overview (see also the story with notes)  

I will have to add another section to my page on Types of Class Discussions; today's class does something very different (and we follow this method 3 or 4 times throughout the course of the year).  The story, "Soldier's Home" is not homework - the students are getting started on their reading of The Things They Carried, and I would rather we read this together - aloud in class, as a work of discovery.  

There is no quiz today - and the printed out stories (they need to have a printed version so that they can take copious notes on it - and like the poems, tuck it into their novel when they are reading it) are given out (or placed on a desk) as they enter the classroom.  Briefly, here are the instructions that I give to the students before we begin.

Begin with the first slide on the Power Point Presentation (found below) - Ask the students to look at it carefully.  Ask if anyone has a comment on it (Always ask the most UNPOINTED question that you can).  Someone will spot that one of the screws is different than all of the rest.  That's it!  Don't elaborate - let it sink in - and be a part of the deep background of reading this story.  

I then show put the Power Point found below up on the screen to help them focus on what to write.  Here are the focusing questions on that Power Point:

1)How does the italicized opening fit with the rest?

2)What does the picture of the screws we just showed have to do with anything

3)Why does he lie? – connect to little Alma

4)How does he view women? What does it have to do with

   the war? With maps?

5)Can you connect his post war life with some people’s

   obsession with social media – think long & hard

6)How do  you view his parent’s view of his life (postwar)

                 What’s the deal with the paper? Giving him the car?

7)  What type of life does he want – why?  What does this have to do with the war?

8)   What’s the deal with his sister? Why is he relaxed with her – but not other women?

9)  How did you feel about that final exchange with his mother?  Why?

Why does he say what he does to her? Compare it to what he said to his
sister.  WHEN is the lie (What is it?)

10)  What will he do and why?

11) What is he carrying with him?


We then read the story aloud.  Start at the front and go down each row - there is more than enough text here - every student will get  a chance to read.  Do NOT worry if they are the best oral performers in the world - it's important when reading aloud in class that everyone participates.  It makes the entire exercise so much more active and the students will pay all the more attention not wanting to miss when they come in.  Allow the student to read for a while - break at natural points.  As I said, there is enough story here to get to everyone.


When you are done - start again with the first student - and go through everyone's observations, comments, questions.  Time it so that you can get to everyone.  Try to weave your own comments into the students - and make sure you get to what you want to bring in - if not already done - after the last student speaks.   Story-wise, perhaps the most stunning thing to happen is when Harold tells his mother that he doesn't love her - it is like a slap to the reader, and nearly everyone of your students will feel its power.  See my Story Notes.


If there is any time left - show the remainder of the Power Point Presentation:

All of the above should tie Hemingway to the Krebbs in the story - and in turn will help tie all of this to Tim and some of the other men in The Things They Carried.  Hemingway, like Krebbs, lied about what actually happened to him in the war - and like Krebbs - that lying sickened him, and this story is part of that confession.

The Story, "Soldier's Home" with my notes

"Soldier's Home" with my notes  see below for student handout (without notes).  

These notes include the questions, comments, and material that I hope come up in the students led discussion.  If they don't, I will try to work in as many as possible as they really do help with the students reading of The Things They Carried (and later All Quiet as well).


Handout - "Soldier's Home" by Ernest Hemingway 

"Soldier's Home" by Ernest Hemingway  Docx  PDF
The unadorned story with the text big enough for the students to read.  I want to emphasize again, how important it is to remind the students that they should be writing all the time as they are listening.  

In most of my handouts that have text to be analyzed - I make sure to leave a wide margin for the students to write notes (both as they're reading and as we talk about the texts as a class). T

You may want to revise this presentation to include whatever else you feel is important or even to directly include the opening instructions that I give above in the directions for the lesson.

Remote Enhancements

The  Power Point (directly above) works wonderfully for remote.  Make sure the students have the text of the story before you begin to read aloud. 

Links

The students did their end of the year project on this short story one year - when I find it , I will put it here.

Class Recordings (for registered members)

Audio

Video

What's Next & Unit Homepage

The Things They Carried Day 3  - "Opening Discussion":We begin the book with a discussion - a teacher led Ringmaster Teacher discussion.  There is so much to cover here - and the teacher can set the tone and pace for what is to follow: until the last discussion - they will all (with the exception of one Group Work) be led by the students using Divided Readings (each row gets a section) - though everyone reads the entire book.

WHAT CAME BEFORE:
                      Poems before The Things They Carried

 

Thoughts on the Lesson 

When we used to put this text  as the first story to read in  In Our Time (instead of its usual place in that book), during our classroom discussion I always found myself calling Harold Krebbs, Paul Baumer (the name of the main character in All Quiet on the Western Front - the book we read directly before In Our Time.  And when you do get to those books - you want to remind students about "Soldier's Home" - it fits in wonderfully with All Quiet as well.